I am a Year 7 learner in Room 1 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mr Moran.
Wednesday, 23 October 2019
Friday, 18 October 2019
writing practice
On Tuesday night I was just playing Call of duty on my phone and I heard a weird noise coming from my addict right outside my bedroom. The noise was like an animal scratching the walls from the outside. So I got out of my bed and tried to find out what that noise was so i opened my door to go to the addict and I had my torch and I turn it and I saw like a box just falling as slow as a snail but the box was on another box falling so the lid was open so I looked inside the box and I saw nothing it was just an old lamp and just a bunch of junk stuff but I heard the same noise but from the other side of the addict so I moved the box’s in the way of getting to the noise and it was also in a box but this time it was a bird that got stuck in the gutter and flew through the hole going into the addict. The bird wasn't like your good old brown yellow and white bird no this birds colours were like a parrot colours red,blue,yellow and white. The bird was a small bird but with really bright colours.
Wednesday, 16 October 2019
Adding detail
BEFORE
During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.
AFTER
During the school holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net in the far distance that we could play with. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball because they had a volleyball but not a volleyball net. They said sure. The volleyball felt squishy and soft. We played volleyball for about an hour then had subway with fresh up juice and cookies for lunch. The subs were amazing and with the juice made it even better and the cookies had the right amount of sweetness. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family who kindly gave us the ball to play with. I had a lot of fun at the beach playing volleyball with my friends.
WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing
WALT write a range of correct sentence types
Read this simple recount.
What do you notice about the recount?
Some of the sentences start with the same word we and it is not that exciting to read.
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What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?
More exciting words and add more vocabulary.
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Edit this recount above to make it more detailed:
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
Rolling the dice
this is the rolling the dice math problem so how to do this math problem is you have to roll a dice and try to get as many doubles as you can and you have to go on a website that has two dice that you have to roll.
Monday, 14 October 2019
DIMIC MATHS
today we had dimic and it was sort of easy but we got seven answers but it really only ad six so we had to x out the seventh answer but we had fun doing dimic.
life's a stage brainstorm
so today we did a brainstorm on drama and dance the words that are in blue are the words that the class has wrote. some words that are blue I am going to name a few drama,acting,props,character and passion just to name a few the reason we did this is because we just wrote some words that we know drama and acting.
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