Friday, 27 March 2020
Can he save her
one day in New York there was a villain called The FINISHER he wanted all of New York to be on their knees but there was a superhero called The HUMAN TORCH who turned into a flame and was able to fly lighting speed going from one continent to another saving thousand of lives.
The FINISHER chased after The HUMAN TORCH on his flying surfboard once they came to an end in California the two mage builds were fighting like their life depended on it because they did when the FINISHER blasted his plasma fist he knocked down a building with only one person in it.
HUMAN TORCH flew as fast as he could to save that one person and the window shattered and the lady fell out of the building falling from a 40ft tall building and the lady was falling like a brick so the HUMAN TORCH flew like a skyscraper was falling down so that he could catch her.
When she was falling the FINISHER tried to shoot her but he missed every shot he took which made the opportunity for HUMAN TORCH to fly in and catch her, saving her life and putting her at safety zone with all the other civilians.
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Hi Suade,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great piece of writing. I like the super hero and villain that you have used in the story and how you have described each of them. You have used a great number of descriptive words to make the story more exciting. Did the Human Torch go back and find the Finisher at the ned of the story? I am really glad that the Human Torch managed to save the lady and bring her to safety. Keep up the great writing!
Miss Parrant