I am a Year 7 learner in Room 1 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mr Moran.
Friday, 17 April 2020
redesigned Goldilokcs and the three bears
Once upon a time in the middle of the woods, there was a cabin that housed three bears, Suade, Kris and Aye, who owned a lot of expensive and valuable items. One day a little boy named Aaron, ventured into the woods to see if he could find anything valuable. Aaron came upon the cabin and it looked very out of place. He decided to go inside, but the door was locked so he knew he had to break in. He got a rock and threw it at the window and slipped through and saw what the cabin had inside. While he was in the cabin he remembered he had been there before for Halloween and their candy was disgusting. He decided he was going to smash their cabin. He smashed the TV and chairs and even the windows. Once Aaron ruined the whole house, Suade,Kris and Aye returned from lunch and saw the condition the cabin was in. Kris said ‘’What happened to the cabin’’? Suade replied ‘’I don’t know but stay back’’. Suade busted open the door and caught Aaron stealing from them and Suade chased Aaron through the house and into the kitchen. Aaron started throwing plates at him, then Suade jumped over the counter and tackled Aaron to the floor. Kris and Aye walked into the cabin to see what was going on. They walked in and sat on the couch while Suade was dealing with Aaron. Suade drags Aaron into the living room with the broken TV. Suade sits down and they all asked Aaron the same question ‘’why did you break into our cabin’’? Aaron replied ‘’I was here last year for Halloween and your candy was disgusting, so that’s why I robbed and wrecked your little cabin’’. Suade replied to Aaron and said ‘’so you robbed our house because our candy last year was disgusting’’. Aaron replied ‘’yeah that’s why I robbed you’’. Once they all looked away Aaron thought to get up and get out of there as fast as he could. Suade and Kris said ‘’let's go get him’’. So they hopped into their car and chased down Aaron. TO BE CONTINUED...
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Hi Suade - that is a real action-packed blog you have written! I hope the police catch Aaron too! I look forward to reading more in your next blog.
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Mrs McMillan