Who am I

The Young Eco Leaders Award

Adding detail

BEFORE

During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.

AFTER

During the school holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net in the far distance that we could play with. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball because they had a volleyball but not a volleyball net. They said sure. The volleyball felt squishy and soft. We played volleyball for about an hour then had subway with fresh up juice and cookies for lunch. The subs were amazing and with the juice made it even better and the cookies had the right amount of sweetness. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family who kindly gave us the ball to play with. I had a lot of fun at the beach playing volleyball with my friends.

WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing

WALT write a range of correct sentence types 

Read this simple recount.

What do you notice about the recount?

Some of the sentences start with the same word we and it is not that exciting to read.

What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?

More exciting words and add more vocabulary.

Edit this recount above to make it more detailed:

Rolling the dice

this is the rolling the dice math problem so how to do this math problem is you have to roll a dice and try to get as many doubles as you can and you have to go on a website that has two dice that you have to roll. 

Life's a stage animation planner

DIMIC MATHS

today we had dimic and it was sort of easy but we got seven answers but it really only ad six so we had to x out the seventh answer but we had fun doing dimic.

life's a stage brainstorm

so today we did a brainstorm on drama and dance the words that are in blue are the words that the class has wrote. some words that are blue I am going to name a few drama,acting,props,character and passion  just to name a few the reason we did this is because we just wrote some words that we know drama and acting.