picnic writing

Two week’s ago we had our school picnic. We walked to the hall and Mr Burt talked about the picnic and when we got to the beach. Mr Burt talked about the place’s we can’t go out of then Mr Burt told our teachers.To line us up to walk under the lollipop  tree we put our bags on. The tarpaulin  then we ran off. I stayed there and i laid  down it was morning tea 5 min’s later.

Then  Kiarah came. Then we played on the park together we had a race who called get to the top on the opposite. Side of the rock. Climbing wall neither of us could get up. So we went

Up the ladder each side. Then we went down. I went on the flying fox. Kiarah  went on the swing we had turn’s  going on each other thing’s. I had 3 turns on the swing and kiarah.

Had 3 turns on the flying fox. Miss davis came to the park. She recorded  me coming down. the slide then i went down the pole.